writing an oral story

This week in year 5 we have been writing oral stories

About Robin Hood in the sheriff's perspective

here is an example

• A bright sunny day a crowd of poor dirty people and rich nice people gathered in my lovely court yard.
• Saxons needed entertainment guarded by my strong and elite Norman soldiers
• The contestants got ready to take there shots on my spotless court yard.
• One of my men blew the trumpet and my lovely tournament.
• The contestants stepped forward to take their shots.
• Every round my men moved the targets 25 paces back.
• Soon there were only five who had made it through and my two Norman soldiers were still in.
• The mysterious green cloaked man stepped forward to take his shot, "He's a fool if he thinks he can win I better get him."
• When I gave the signal two of my strong soldiers appeared.
• The man in green took his final shot and hit the bullseye.
• "Hold him".
• "So Robin Hood we meet at last"
• "Thats not robin hood" "what are you talking about".

By Luke & Jamie