Thursday 23 October 2008
Graffiti art Display
Writting in the style of Roald Dahl
- they make you laugh
- they make you squirm
- they keep you enthralled
- they make you think
- they hook the reader
- they make you suspicious
We also noted the different ways in which Dahl started his stories - did he get straight into the action like in the BFG or did he introduce the characters like in Charlie and the Chocolate Factory?
We also discussed how Dahl's stories were full of DAD - Description, action and dialogue.
We tried to use as many Dahl-like features in our stories as possible and we have done very well.
We also put into practise what we have been learning about punctuating dialogue and writing complex sentences. What a lot we had to think about!
Here are some extracts from our stories-
Humphrey wandered around until he heard a thumping sound. It was coming nearer and nearer every second, Humphrey was terrified. Now he could hear tiny voices getting louder and louder chanting, "hup, two, three, four'' repeating it again and again and again. Quickly he raced behind a tree but it was too late they, whoever ''they" were, had spotted him! like a bolt of lightning, he hid fully behind the tree then, gradually peered round just to find ...hamsters!
By Alanah
The evil twins put a slimy worm under the nice twins pillow but what was going to happen in the morning when the twins find out? "Ahhhhhhhhhhhh! Get it off! Get it off!" screamed Casey. "It's going in my hair"
"I have one too," yelled Kirsty. "Get it out, get it out! I smell the work of the Tweevils here!"
By Lucie
The giants are finished!
We carefully put the finishing touches to them trying all the time to keep them in Roald Dahl's wonderful style and making them as grotesque as possible - check out the warts, hairy armpits and noses and the dripping blood after chomping on a child!
Here they are:
Wednesday 22 October 2008
Giants
By Billy and Callum.L